you've created a very powerful image here Alloyce, and 'shown' us Ethan's mood rather than telling…

Over the days after Isabella had moved in with them, Ethan spent most of his time in his room punching a black leather punch bag that hang naked from the ceiling in his room until sweat — hot and slick — beaded on his forehead and dripped down his arms, soaking his shirt into a heavy second skin.
Forbidden Fruit
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Alloyce Lugoma
✍ Posy Churchgate
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May 15, 2024
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you've created a very powerful image here Alloyce, and 'shown' us Ethan's mood rather than telling - bravo!
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