You maintained 'teetering on the edge of something' as a thread running through the whole piece.

…hen she felt her lips parting and melding with his, when she felt herself lifting into his embrace. A dozen possibilities lingered behind her closed eyelids, choices that, even now, could spin the trajectory of her life about like a pinwheel. She considered them all, and then let them melt away into the heat of their kiss.
Interview at the Red Diamond
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Celia McKinley
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Mar 17, 2024
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You maintained 'teetering on the edge of something' as a thread running through the whole piece. I won't make any further comment as I am 1 of the judges. Thanks for entering Celia
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