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Excellent finale Eli.

It was quite a gamble to plonk the sex scene in the middle of a fight, but you pulled it off (as did Frank!)

This story has a very distinctive voice, like a graphic novel, which I appreciated.

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✍ Posy Churchgate
✍ Posy Churchgate

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